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Caeru
05-04-2007, 08:06 AM
Lyric wanted me to post this :pottytrain5: Feedback welcome.

PART 1

Once upon a time, there was nothing but Nun: an ocean with no shore, the waves of which danced in their rise and fall in neverending darkness. Then, slowly, out of the waves started to emerge the original subtance, a mix of sand and slay, rising over the black water. And right on the top of this first island, an egg appeared… The egg cracked and cracked, until it broke completely and out of it jumped Re, the god of the Sun, in other name Amon, the father of all gods, and coated the world into his shining light. He did not rest for a while, put the entire world in order and created the god of Earth, Geb, and his sister Nut, the goddess of Heaven. Nut bent her enormous body in a vault, touching Geb with her hands and feet, and Shu, the god of Air and third child of Re, propped up her stomach, separating her from the Earth. The world as we know it came to existence.

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Amon rules over the gods and over the people, of which he especially favours the mighty kingdom of Egypt. Of course, he has too many duties to be able to be physically present on the Earth, therefore he had once chosen a representative, an incarnation of god on the Earth, to rule in Egypt and wear the symbol of Re´s eye. When he aged and left this world, kings of this first Pharao´s bloodline followed one after another. In the time when I was born, our kingdom was – safely, as I thought back then - in the hands of Akhenaton. Only his closest blood relatives and his wife, beautiful Djeserit, was allowed to call him by that name of course – for the rest of Egypt he was the Pharao, although some called him „Horus“ or „Mighty Bull.“

I called him father.

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It is said that royal children and wives are often the most uncared-for, and that seems to be natural, because the Pharao is very busy with watching over Maat in both Upper and Lower Egypt. Moreover, it was a custom if not duty for the Mighty Bull to spread his seed and grace the land with royal spawn. The Pharao would often keep a harem filled with hundreds of beauties from all around the world, sometimes several harems – one in each of the bigger cities along Nile where he liked to spend time, and it was not unusual for him to have several wives. My father differed vastly from this standard. In his wisdom, he knew that having more wives only leads to rivality and hathred in the family – certainly not an athmosphere one would like to live in, as well as having too many children is often the cause of wars, assassinations and courtly machinations as they fight for the throne. Therefore, he decided to keep our nuclear family small and it definitely did not seem like he suffered from the lack of fresh meat – quite on the contrary: after more than twenty henti spent together, he still loved my mother just the same and this love bound our small family together with ties that could never fall apart – or so I thought.

Already in my early childhood, I knew that as the only son, I would have to replace my father on the throne one day, for even the god on the Earth does not live forever and the bigger part of my day was always taken up by learning. At first I had to master the arti of reading and writing, given to us by Thovt, then I could be educated in history and geography of our kingdom. It is the fate of many sons of Egypt, to spend a big part of their childhood with preparation for the upcoming adulthood, but even so I was not denied the company of kids my age. Education with my tutor was avialable for everyone in the palace, and most of the children loved to learn.

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I grew up surrounded by love. Apart of the hours spent on studying and physical training, there was always time to make friends, go fishing or just sail down the river Nile, read in father´s scrolls, play with one of the many cats the palace was always full of, or spend an afternoon playing sennet and talking with my sister, Zahra. Her name means „flower“, but speaks nothing of her true beauty, which – at least for me – has always been undescribable. Zahra was born two years after me, but as far as I can remember, we have always been as close as twins, sharing every thought, every fear, every dream.

Of my parents, I´d always inclined more to my father than to my mother, mostly because of the interest in history that we had in common. Every since his teenage years, father had been nurturing the thought that it was his task to discover all the ancient tombs of kings of the Old Kingdom in Saqquara that had been robbed or damaged and forgotten in time, repair them and bring their owners peaceful rest and new fame. Usually, he would take a writer with him, several servants – those few that were not afraid of entering a place that belonged to the Death – and me. My mother didn´t approve of our trips into the desert, especially of the fact that I should obtain knowledge about death and afterlife as a mere teenager, but I was eager to learn and father was equally excited to gain an aide, a future priest, mage and historician just like himself.

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The tombs we were discovering lay in the middle of the desert, which alone made many a man want to avoid escorting the King on those trips. Myself, I loved the desert just as much as I loved the oasis or the Nile – another treat me and my father had in common. The heat was never too unbearable for me, and we remembered to always carry enough water, beer and a sheet under which we could hide over the noon, when Amon´s rays grew in intensity.

One day, walking a few steps ahead of our servants, we were enjoying a peaceful conversation, when my father suddenly stopped and pointed forwards towards the endless sea of dunes. I looked in that direction and my heart stopped beating in my chest… A woman was walking in front of us somewhere in the distance, her features clearly outlined in the shimmering, boiling air. „What is that?“ I whispered, grabbing my father´s arm, „fata morgana?“ Yet I already knew it cannot be a mere hallucination, because her tall, lean body was casting a shadow and sand behind her feet was rising in small dusty clouds as she moved. She was walking with such self-confidence and ease that one could spend ages just looking at the swaying of her hips and be heavenly happy. And, judging by the sight of father´s face, he was thinking the very same. Her dress was snowwhite, very old-fashioned in style, but that exactly made her so attractive because it tightly embraced her body, showing all curves and not leaving anything for imagination. I don´t know how long we were observing her, all I know is, that suddenly, the seductive figure disappeared – just like that, no smoke, no swirl of wind, no flash of lightening. She was simply there and a second later, she was gone, leaving no trace at all.

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„The desert has its mysteries, Tumaini“, my father explained to me, „it is only upon the gods when and how it decides to reveal them to us. When it happens, you should not ignore them… They can help you discover the very meaning of your life.“ „But… who was she?“ „Who knows… Maybe a Goddess, maybe a ghost, maybe an omen. Let us follow her path!“

Our curiosity made it seem like ages of fruitless walking, during which we saw nothing unusual at all, just sand, sand and more sand… until finally my father tripped over something. When I looked down, I saw him brushing away the sand from something that looked like a large stone, yet it was too well-polished, too smooth to be one. I knelt down at my fathers side, helping him to clean more of the surface of that thing. A large stony area started to emerge under our hands, most likely the top of a tomb.

"She must have been a Goddess..." my father whispered, "a Goddess showing me the way..."

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My father immediately gave out the needed directions and sent slaves into the desert to clean away the sand around the newly found tomb, choosing Afnet, his most dedicated servant, as the leader of the working group. Ten days passed before Afnet returned with the news that the Pharao´s find was now ready to be approached. Yet as he informed us about it, there was more fear than joy reflecting in his usually blank face. Father noticed it too and asked: „What is it, Afnet? Has something happened that I should know about?“ Afnet seemed to be hesistating for a while, shuffling his feet on the floor and coughing. „My King, it seems that the tomb has been untouched by robbers. We have found out that all the walls are still standing and there are no holes in them. Also the main entrance appears not to have been opened since the day when those dead inside had been left there. I have closely inspected the seal on the door and I dare to say that it is original. I would strongly advise to leave it as it is…“ „It´s not your place to advise, Afnet“, father said coldly, his eyes shining with a kind of passion only a devoted historician can know. „This evening, when I have finished all my duties, we shall open the tomb. Let everyone know. Those who are afraid can stay here, I won´t be forcing anyone to go against their beliefs.“

Those words were the caused that when darkness fell, me and my father were the only ones standing at the gate. I think he knew already back then that his doing was not entirely right, otherwise he would have simply ordered the members of our usual group to join us. After all, he was the Pharao. He had the power. Even I felt doubts eating me away from the inside, growing from minute to minute as we got closer to the tomb. The Death do not like to be disturbed. Fear was crawling to me across the desert sand like the demonic snake Apopis. „Dad, I´m afraid…“ I whispered hoarsely. „This is different than what we usually do…this place is untouched, still protected by the ancient magic. We should not commit the original sin. Please, let us go home…“

„Nonsense…“ the Pharao reached for his dagger and cut the rope with the seal in half, ready to open the door. „We are no thieves. We will simply look inside, then have the entire building repaired, and at the end we will seal the door again, leaving offerings for the Ka of whoever is resting inside and pray for the peace of his soul, as we always do. I promise we will do no damage.“

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With joint powers, we started to push at the door, until finally it gave in and a little passage created itself on the side. Father used it to support himself and with a mighty push, we revealed the entire opening, out of which a greyish smoke started to rise in clouds, filling our lungs with its rotten stench and spiraling upwards: a bad omen. Carefully spying around for possible traps, we slowly entered and proceeded through the corridor, decorated with paintings of the gods, mainly Anubis with the head of a jackal – my patron, into the main room.

Father entered before me, and I could already hear his sigh as he stood framed in the door. Soon, I found out the reason of his disappiontment: the room was huge, with richly decorated walls – the paintings seemed to be from the age of the Old Kingdom – and a sarcophagus was leaning at the wall. Next to it, there was a massive chest – and that was that. „Apparently, the thieves did find a way to get inside, even though the door hadn´t been damaged…“ „Yes… Maybe a tunnel somewhere?“ I was pondering aloud, trying to get rid of other, very strange thoughts that were buzzing in my head like wild bees. The room didn´t look like if it had been robbed. It looked like if someone had left it empty for a reason… But what could the reason be? Noone wants to enter afterlife without possessions, without servants, without things he used to love when he was alive. Especially not a rich person who can afford all that and more - and this dead had been very rich. Inspecting the sarcophagus closely, it became clear to me that it must have been a princess... I run my finger over her name, written on the side: Meshhenet. Destiny.

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While I was bending over the mummy, my father walked up to the chest and opened it. I turned my head when I heard its creaking sounds only to see it was empty as well... but for a thing in the edge, which my father was already retrieving. A scroll. I watched his fingers wrapping around it and wanted to shout - careful, it might be too old, it might fall apart, but all at once, such a strong wave of nausea overcame me that I had to cover my mouth and stumble out of the tomb. Father emerged a while later, offering me his arm. "Are you allright? What happened?" "The air must have been too much for me..." I uttered, yet somehow I wasn´t sure if that was the case. "Let us go home then. This place was a disappointment. I will give orders for the works on the outer walls to start tomorrow, as soon as they are finished, we can do the offerings and close it."

The next morning, father was late for breakfest - a very unusual thing. Unexplicably worried after our night experience, I run to his bedroom to look if he was allright and found him crouched over the table, murmuring something under his breath. I did not understand the words, but as a magician-apprentice, I clearly recognized the mellodic rhytm that magic formulae often have. Father was not paying attention to me at all and it seemed obvious that he had spent the entire night in the same position. Unnoticed, I walked closer to the table, peering over his shoulder. "Oh no... Father, you did not!" As I spoke, he finally raised his head with a smile. "Tumaini! Maybe you could help me with translating this..." "Is this the scroll from the tomb? Is this it??" My question was mostly rhetorical, because I recognized too well, what it was. "You know how dangerous it is to take away things that belong to the Dead. Do you want us to be cursed?" "Tumaini, stop behaving like a supersticious old woman. I will simply make a copy of it, try to translate it and then I will return it where we found it." I just shook my head. This was the first time in my life when father was behaving illogically, and I didn´t like it one bit.

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I questioned him about the scroll several times until he finally told me after a few days that he had returned it into its chest without being able to translate it completely. I happily forgot about it - sun was shining and my 20th birthday was approaching. I had all the reasons to forget about the Dead for a while and drink from the cup of life with big gulps.

One beautiful afternoon, father took me to the market place - we occasionally liked to visit the city and see its daily life and buzz, so different from the life in the palace. We spent a while talking about my possible marriage and buying a few needless fandangles just for the fun of it, when suddenly I felt a tug on my tunic. I looked at father and saw he was trying to make me focus on a woman who was crossing the market place, heading towards us. And we both recognized the figure, the accomplished style of walking, those hips, wrapped in a richer, yet still old-fashioned tunic, the hair, now revealing a face that matched the rest of her amazing body.

I thought that was it... I thought we would return home and talk about her during the meal, laughing as we usually did. How wrong I was! For the second time that month, father did something that came as a nasty surprise for me. He stopped her and asked her prize.

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Immediately, I forgot how charmed I had been myself when I first saw her and a wave of hate started to form itself deep in my heart. Apparently, she was no goddess or vision, but a mere widow of good bloodline who had moved into the city after the passing of her husband. A woman who used to live in a damp place and loves the desert sun... loves walking in it. A woman too proud to be a concubine.

Who would have thought that a single encounter in the sand could change so much? Father wanted her so badly that he did not hesistate to offer marriage, where money would not do. Instead of celebrating my birthday, we had a wedding to plan. No matter how much my mother, my sister and I disagreed, the Pharao had his way and the household forcefully grew in number. I did not recognize my father. During the last month, he was slowly mutating into a different kind of person in front of my eyes, and there was nothing I could do to stop it.


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TO BE CONTINUED

LyricLee
05-04-2007, 01:24 PM
YAYAYA I LOVE this story! I want more updates, I think the pics are incredible and so is the story too!!!!!! <3

Caeru
05-12-2007, 11:30 PM
part 2

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Two months have passed since Chione joined our household, closely followed by her younger cousine, Jibade – a sleek, yet well- muscled man with golden skin and his cousin´s ellegant movements, whose face somehow always managed to keep a serious, yet slightly ironical expression. It was not usual for the Pharao to authomatically offer his second wive´s relatives a post in the palace, but of course, there was nothing father would not do when his new-found love batted her long lashes. Quite surprisingly, I was the only one who didn´t approve of that step. Father´s fascination with that man was not unexpected, after all he was a relative – if distant – of the woman who captured his heart, and moreover, Jibade possessed a great knowledge in the history of the mighty Egyptian kingdom and in the arts of magic, so he and father could do research together. My mother enjoyed talking to him most likely for the reason that she had been more or less abandoned by my father since Chione´s arrival and missed male company. But that his charisma should capture my sister to the extent I have not yet experienced – Zahra had always been more interested in feeding our pet-snakes, playing with the cats, reading and swimming, than in men – that was a wonder to me. At the age of eighteen, she should have been already married, but as well as me, she was waiting for love, trying to escape a marriage out of reason and social status.

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At the beginning, I thought it to be merely a young girl´s crush on an older man that would pass as quickly as it came and I was also hoping that these affections wouldn´t be mutual – after all, Chione´s cousin was a very attractive man in his early thirties that could fool many female heads, if he really wanted to. But to my great regret, he seemed to be happiest when he could spend an afternoon at Nile in the company of my sister, fishing, swimming or just sitting on the shore and enjoying a passionate discussion. If there was something Zahra was really good at, then it was talking – otfen about topics one would not expect to be voiced by a woman. I could but hope that debating about the world was all they did, but something kept telling me that even those hopes were false. Yes, I could definitely sense a developing relationship.

When I approached my parents on that matter, they simply laughed at me. „There is nothing to worry about“, father said meekly, „in fact, if Zahra decided to allow Jibade to propose to her, I would only welcome that decision. She is more than old enough to choose a husband, and Jibade is someone we know well. He won´t be a disappointment.“ You know nothing about him, I wanted to shout, nothing but the fact that he is some sort of cousin of that bitch of yours, and you don´t really know anything about HER either. They could be anyone! But I didn´t really say it aloud, because it was my mother´s turn to speak and she managed to turn the entire thing against me. „You are already twenty. You are a prince of pure royal blood, don´t you think it´s about time to get married, too?“ „But I am trying to find the right one…“ I groaned, unhappy with the course our discussion has taken, „it´s just difficult because young girls are so boring and older women don´t attract me at all… I want to find the right one – and you of all should understand that.“ The last part was meant for my father and I already regretted saying that in front of my mother, his abandoned first wife. But what is said, is said, and nobody really listened to me anyway. In my opinion, Jibade only wanted to give his very fitting name („related to royalty“) a whole new meaning. Who knows why had Chione presented herself to us on the desert and then later in the city on a golden plate? Most likely, it was all a clever plan to get into the royal family, and they might have as well worked on it together…

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Call me paranoid, but I was having a hard time getting used to the changes Chione had brought about, beginning with the coldness between my parents, up to the constant mess and noise in the garden, a part of which was being demolished and used as a base for a new wing of the palace that should accomodate the second royal wife – who, apparently, was not overtly fond of her rooms - and her personal suite in the future. Trying to avoid her presence, I rarely ever took part on family dinners or lunches and I rather ate outside in the garden, unless we had politically important guests that needed to be entertained (or rather guests that were supposed to entertain us, which, however, never worked, because they were always trying too hard – and what is forced simply cannot be funny). My mother´s 35th birthday was an exception to that pattern. For her, I was willing to dress my best, allow the servants to take care of my make-up and hairdo and attend the official dinner.

The events that happened that afternoon are carved deep in my memory and sometimes, when I lay sleepless in my bed, they replay themselves in front of my closed eyes in slow motion – the lids serve as a canvas, on which a ruthless painter delivers precise strokes of his brush, dipped in human blood. The entire family sitting behind the table, consuming the last pieces of our rich meal… a cry… heads turning towards my mother ever so slowly… many eyes following her as she stumbles away, perhaps towards the bathroom… one of her hands clutching her stomach, the other rising to cover her mouth, lips suddenly crimson with droplets of blood.

My sister immediately jumped out, knocking over her stool, offering mother her arms as a support, trying to lead her to the bedroom, but she couldn´t stop the taller and older woman from collapsing. At the same time, there was my father´s voice yelling at our taster, a Nubian servant – did she taste both the meal and the wine? And the dessert? What about the fruit? Apparently, he already found his deliquent, someone he could blame for the poisoning, and as he struck the black girl´s face, sending her flying to the ground, I turned away and by chance, I caught Chione´s amused smile. Her cousin´s expression matched hers - more ironical than usually, the sophisticated kind of amusement. How could those people be happy at someone else´s misfortune?

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The Queen was promptly escorted to bed and the best doctors and healers were called to aid her, but despite of the thorough examining, none of them was able to tell, what was wrong with her. The initial thought of poison was slowly forgotten, as she lived on for another two weeks, her state unchanged. Finally, someone came up with the idea that it might be a curse looming over the Queen´s head and in addition to the medicines they had been trying to get into her throat, now magical formulae came to word. But even the magicians were unable to ease mother´s pain or wake her up from the sleep-like state she found herself in since the „accident“, as my sister started to call it. Sometimes she would open her eyes, motioning for us to come closer with a small nod, as if she were trying to convey a message, but even if I leant right to her lips, she was too week to whisper to me what was on her heart.

She died quietly two weeks later, without having told us what she had meant to tell. Zahra and I were on her side as it happened. During the entire time of her suffering, one of us was always in her room, so that he could call the other one if needed. Father was not there when the Ka of his First wife left the world of living. He had only visited her twice, maybe three times and let her depart into the realms of Usire without any words of love or prayers. He was too busy in bed, I suppose. And maybe – and I really, really tried to make that particular thought leave my head – maybe Chione and her cousin weren´t the only ones who cherished seeing my mother dead. Maybe he also felt relief.

After my mother´s death, a long period of mourning started for our family. Mother´s body was entrusted to the priests, so that the embalmment procedures could start. The inner organs would be taken out of the body, the cavity washed out with palm wine and aromatic oils and filled with a mixture of herbs. The entire body would rest dipped in natron for seventy days and seventy nights, before it could be cleaned again and wrapped into fine bandages, soaked up with wattle resin. After that, the mummy would be closed into a richly decorated sarcophagus and showcased for seven days for the family to give their last good-bye. Only then, the pyramid could be closed and the mourning would be over.

It meant to spend several months only in the company of my disintegrated family, which was slowly driving me crazy. Too many thoughts of the worst kind were buzzing in my head, I could not sleep unless I drunk an excessive amount of wine or a cut of poppy draught, and even then I spent the night rolling on the bad, haunted by nightmares. And, of course, I missed mother. I was an adult man now, a prince, hiding under mother´s skirts had become unacceptable for me many years ago, but she had always been there for me. Without her strong voice giving orders to servants, welcoming us home at the end of the day or laughing during a pleasant chatter with her friends, the palace seemed silent and empty. The fact that Zahra now prefered sharing her own sadness with Jibade over sharing it with me, and that the gap between me and my father was only enlarged through that disaster, was making it even worse.

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There were times when I just couldn´t stand it anymore... Then, I would disappear through the back door and take a long stroll, sometimes along Nile, but usually farther away, into the desert. Thanks to my father, I could never get lost there, and I knew about places where a wanderer could hide under a rock or a solitary palm tree and undisturbed followed the train of his thoughts. I do admit that at times, I tried hard not to think. Instead, I concentrated on the rays of Amun, warming the sand under my back when I laid down, warming the air so that it started to shimmer, warming my rigid limbs and filling me with life energy. Sometimes I would nap in the palm shade, catching up with sleep after the long, frightening nights.

One afternoon, I let sleep carry me away once again and woke up with the feeling that someone had been staring at me. Worriedly, I opened my eyes and scanned the surroundings, until I met the gaze of a black jackal. Still confused with slumber, I lifted one hand to shoo it away, forgetting for a while that I had just met a sacred animal, not a stray dog. Thankfully I reminded myself in time and let the hand fall again, slowly rising from the ground, approaching the animal. „I am sorry that I cannot feast you, as I have already eaten all I had with me“, I said appologetically, „but maybe you would appreciate some water in this heat?“ With that, I opened the fluid container I always carried with me on such occasions, poured as much water as possible into my palm and offered it to the jackal. He didn´t hesistate and soon I felt the strokes of his soft pink tongue licking at the water. When I tried to pat him with my other hand, he didn´t mind, just tilted his head a little, eyeing me with his golden gaze. Did more jackals have eyes like molten sun, such as their patron Anubis, or was this one special?

I already knew the answer when the animal started tugging at my skirt, trying to make me follow him. When he didn´t get the desired reaction immediately, the jackal run a few meters in front of me, turned around and watched me, one paw in the air. „Allright, allright… I am coming…“ I wondered where was the animal leading me and why, however, only shortly, because I soon started to recognize the surroundings. It was the way to the tomb we had found that day when our lives changed forever.

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Father still hadn´t closed it, probably because of the mourning period – maybe mother´s death struck him harder than I had previously thought and he had forgotten about it completely. I hesistated, not wanting to repeat the fearful experience of entering the tomb, but when the jackal disappeared in the door, I knew I had no choice but to follow. What was it he wanted to show me? The tomb was as empty as I remembered it.

The animal obviously had a clear goal, aiming for the wall at the other side of the chamber, and with a shock, I observed him passing through it like a ghost. Indeed, my father had been right: the desert does have its mysteries… I walked across the room up to the wall, touching it with the tips of my fingers. In comparison to the other walls, it seemed smoother and kind of… wet. Of course, I knew I could not pass through it like the jackal, undoubtedly a manifestation of Anubis, but he must have wanted to leave me sign of something. I knocked on the wall, then pounded on it with my fists, and a hollow sound filled my ears. It seemed another chamber could be hidden there… the wall was most likely fake!

I started to examine more thoroughly the place where the jackal passed through the wall – quite appropriately, it was a painting of the god Anubis. My fingers run probingly across the god´s body, looking for nothing in particular, until they stopped on the Ankh in his hand. I felt something move and authomatically hunched and covered my head, fearing I set some trap into motion. But instead, the entire wall started to move, opening a passage leading into a small chamber.

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The air in the tomb has changed. The stench of ancient, rotting watter attacked my nostrils so fiercely that I could almost feel the mass rising in a wave over my head and suffocating me. Against my will, I had to shiver. In the dim light of the torch, I could see something glistening and dark, crawling all around and all over the things stored in that chamber: the floor was covered in a sheet of black, fetid water. In the middle of that strange, shallow see, stood two OPEN sarcophagi on piedestals.

The water was all but inviting, but I was here for a reason, and from where I was standing, I could have hardly explored the chamber… so I reluctantly stepped into it. The movement created tiny waves on the steel water, causing it to slam at the wall on the other side with a disgusting sound. That gave me the shivers… But I had to proceed through it, feet in sandals sliding on the slimy, rocky ground, looking around suspiciously. There were enough boxes and chests in the chamber, containing the earthly belongings of the Death, but as I could see, some of them were now open and empty, flagons of exquisite vine and aromatic oils also gone, but for several broken ones. Even all the Ushabti figurines, one for each day of a year, were gone, leaving the deceased with noone to work for them in the fields of Osiris, noone to care for their well-being in the Otherworld. The small niches in the wall signalled, where the Ushabti overseers used to be placed. Unmistakeable signs of theft.

Finally I reached the piedestals, placed my torch into the stand on the side of one sarcophagus and peeked inside. It was empty, and as I soon discovered, so was the other one. By Sutech! My stomach nearly turned over when I realized where the bodies probably found themselves – in the water I was standing in almost up to the waist, decomposed. Sometimes, grave robbers would open the sarcophagi and tear the bandages off the mummies, searching for expensive amulets underneath, shielding the dead person´s heart, and for other jewellery. Afterwards, they don´t hesistate to scatter the broken bodies around like unneeded rubbish. The thought I was probably standing in someone´s dissolved bodily fluids made my day.

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I was already getting ready to leave the forsaken place, when I suddenly notice a darker spot at the base of the wall and underneath, on a place where the water was extremely shallow. A hole! I managed to overcome my disgust and submerged one hand into the water to probe it. The opening seemed to be big enough for an adult to crawl through. Most likely this was the way the robbers used to get in! As I raised from the opening, my eyes fell on the paintwork on the wall: a lady and a man, most likely the owners of the tomb, dressed in old-fashionate, body hugging robes. I heard myself chuckle. My father would have loved them. When did I get this sarcastic?

Driven by a sudden urge, I took a deep breath and went under water, sticking my head into the tunnel. It was dry, dark but solid and the air in it was fresh, undeniable coming from outside. Without much thinking, I started to crawl through it until the darkness dissolved into dim grey, and finally I was proceeding towards light. The tunnel mouthed in the desert, a bit farther away from the city. Strangely enough, it was not covered by sand or stones, which would be expected – as if somebody had used it just recently.

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I had gained more questions than answers, but noone could explain those mysteries to me, noone but time or the gods, if they decided to be merciful. I decided not to talk with my father about anything that had just happened – his reaction would certainly be all but positive – and went directly into my rooms instead, muttering a prayer to Anubis, Thovt and Re, asking them to guard my steps. Then I took my long overdue bath, discarding my dirty, stinking clothing on the way. I must have spent hours relaxing in the aromatic water, but I didn´t make me feel one bit more clean, as if nothing could wash away the the ancient smudge from the tomb.

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Surprisingly enough, I fell asleep as soon as my head touched the pillow and my dreams were filled with bliss, positive omens and laughter… a youthful, cheerful laughter. I remember I was searching for the owner of that sweet, sweet voice, then chasing her in our garden, but she always managed to hide behind a tree and I never got more than a quick glance into her big brown puppy eyes. Then, all at once, her voice calling me startled me awake. „Prince, prince!!!“ Confused, I was gazing into a pair of brown puppy eyes with long, soft lashes, just like those from my dream – except the voice belonged to a boy. I propped myself up to look at the intruder thoroughly – a young servant I didn´t know, sweet fifteen or sixteen, shivering like a leaf. „By Sutech, what are you doing in my bedroom?“ I muttered. „Please, please don´t send me to prison…“ he begged, „I have something important to tell!“ I sighed, rolling over. „It will have to wait till the morning… or better yet, requet a hearing at my father´s, I´m sure he´ll be able to help you. Now let me sleep.“ „It´s about the Queen, may her Ka live forever in the land of Osiris.“

„What?“ I jumped out, hearing that my mother had been mentioned. „Who are you, and what is it you have to tell?“ „I am Badru, a slave of the royal wife, bought and given to her recently by your father, the Bringer of life and death, Mighty Bull, the Eye of Horus. I have the permission to clean up in her rooms when she is not present, because when she is present… I… she… she disapproves of my talking. It´s not like I talk a lot, but her other servants don´t talk at all, they probably don´t even have a tongue and…“

„Badru, WHAT do you want to tell me!“ I stopped him sharply, getting a bit annoyed. „I appologize… here…“ he was handing me some small object made of wax. „I found this when I was cleaning up in the new Queen´s bedroom. I´ve accidentaly knocked over an amphora, and when I was trying to fix it, I heard something rattling inside… When I saw what it was, I thought you must see it“, he explained, putting stress on the word „you“, as if he wanted to point out it had to be me, not my father. I inspected the object suspiciously, breath squeezed out of my lungs by some godly power. It was a rough wax doll in the shape of a woman, with my mother´s name carved on its back. There was a long needle sticking out of the doll´s stomach and yet another one leading through it´s head from one ear to another. The thing was wrapped tightly in a bow, at the end of which was dangling my mother´s lucky charm. „I hope this is a very bad joke“, I said shakily, already knowing it was not.

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I slid out of the bed, quickly wrapping myself in a skirt, putting the most important jewellery on. That would have to do, there was no time for doing my make-up or hair. I grabbed the boy by the hand, dragging him along out of the room. „Come. You have to tell this to my father, the sooner, the better.“ „The Pharao won´t listen to me…“ he squeaked, hopping behind me, trying to pull his hand out of mine. „I´ll make him listen.“ „He will throw me to the crocodiles!“ he complained. „I am too young to die, I haven´t yet lived!“ Me, too, I thought for myself. But I wasn´t dying yet, was I? Although, with Chione in the house, who knew…

„You are my witness, Badru!“ I insisted. „You have to tell my father what you found, he wouldn´t believe me alone.“ A sad truth to be told. He stopped wiggling and followed me, apparently resigned. Surprisingly enough, my father´s rooms were empty – I was searching for him in the entire wing, leaving out only the room where he often worked on his research. It was full of ancient scrolls and father hated when we entered uninvited. However, this time, and exception had to be made. I was sure we´d find him hunched over a scroll, reading or asleep with his head laying on the table, which had often been the case in the past, but the silence told me otherwise. „Damn… where are you when I need you the most…“ I muttered under my breath, when something on a small table next to the scroll depository caught my attention.

„This can´t be the truth!“ I gasped, because I immediately recognized the object. An old scroll, yellow with age but still surprisingly firm, the ink black like if it were new. The scroll from the tomb. I couldn´t believe he lied to me and never returned it. This equalled a sacrilege! Only slowly, I realized Badru was looking at me questioningly. Whatever. He didn´t need to know. „Let´s go. He will be in Chione´s bed, no doubt. I´ll drag him out of there right now, there are two things we need to talk about, I fear!“

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I was about to knock at Chione´s door, but the sounds of breathing and little moans, implying coitus, made me stop and wait. There are things one definitely shouldn´t interrupt… Good thing I had not. I would have been in for another nasty surprise. „You´re amazing…absolutely amazing…“ „Like in those good old times…“ a male voice replied. A voice that didn´t belong to my father, but to… Jibade. My jaw dropped. That was too much, definitely too much.

The next thing I sensed was a small hand pulling me away from the door and behind the pilar. Badru put one finger on his lips, crouched behind a huge gold statue of Amun himself. A servant Chione had brought with her and made a member of her personal guard when she moved in was strolling across the hall towards us, probably to check on the queen´s safety. It felt awkward to be hiding in my OWN palace like a thief, but somehow I didn´t want Chione to know that I´d met Badru and what we´d both heard.

The black man passed by and for a short while, I had his back in view. As he moved, his loose clothing revealed a shoulder blade. Both me and Badru had to suppress a gasp at the same time. There was a name carved in the man´s flesh: Jibade. What kind of person could be so cruel to mark their servants in such a way? I felt the boy clinging to me, shaking. It wasn´t difficult to guess what was on his mind. „It´s allright“, I whispered, stroking his messy hair, then his cheek, „it´s allright, I won´t let them harm you. I promise.“ His skin was soft, smooth and warm… incredibly comforting.

To Be Continued

LyricLee
05-13-2007, 01:02 AM
Ok Comment time!!!! This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome!!!!
Seriously, your best story ever! I want more, loads and loads more... and quickly! I demand it :)

Caeru
05-13-2007, 09:31 AM
lol the fact that you´re the only one reading it is depressive, though. LOL.

LyricLee
05-31-2007, 08:53 AM
If you dont update youll make me cry!

GoldenSimmer
05-31-2007, 06:49 PM
Update!!!

Don't make Lyric cry...

Or this kitten...


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girlmemory2005
02-17-2008, 01:20 PM
Oh......How Cute. All character 's beautiful.
and view ,Wall ,objects in you picture are be beautiful.
I Very respect you. How to make The sims like this.
Are you distribute this sims?
I like all character. Good create and Good imagination.

Wow!!!!!!! I love this. ^___^

Caeru
03-20-2008, 09:54 AM
wow... someone was still reading this!!! like four weeks ago.

I didnt realize I never posted it whole. I as well might now LOL.